phenomanon
Canyon
I think Stratti was already 'out' when it was placed in every fooking course pack.Correct!
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Clay Pigeon
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Like most great writers I LOVE editors.You make far too many English errors for Stratty to keep up, so I have volunteered to fill in a bit while he is on the other side of the ocean sleeping.
I don't have time to go through each and every error, so just provided a summary:
1. Misuse of Semicolons. These are used to separate two parts of a sentence when each of the sentence parts on either side of the semicolon can stand alone as its own sentence. For some strange reason, you seem to think semicolons are used before the word ''as."
2. Run-on Sentences.
3. Excessive Verbiage.
4. Misuse and Overuse of Ellipses.
5. Beginning a Sentence with a Conjunction.
6. Misuse and Inappropriate Use of Hyphens. "Puppetmaster" and "Judeochristian" should be, "puppet-master" (or puppet master) and "Judeo-Christian." "Far ranging" is correctly spelled, "far-ranging" and requires a hyphen. Both Christian and Judeo should also be capitalized.
7. Lack of Necessary Commas and Misuse of Commas.
8. Redundancy. Example: Instead of listing "study, research" as separate things, you could have just written either word, since they are synonyms.
9. Incomplete Sentences.
Keep working at it. You're welcome.
Properly seasoned and roasted to a turn they can be an excellent source of protein in the diet
lotus
stubborn rebel sheep!
Oh true Phenon,
Oh wait..May be uncle Stratty was stuck in bed sheets exhibiting his unprecended fabuloulsy amazing clear bracelet to impress a lovely young female
That would explain why he didn't pay any proper attention to what must be done to keep $cientology working.
He was into romantic self-abnegation!
My guess is that uncle Stratty was a $cientology dilletante!
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Leland
Crusader
French!
Pineau des Charentes ,
Escargots, huitres et saumon fumé sur canapés
with english tea - milk and sugar.
and petit fours and Tarte Tatin for dessert!
lotus
stubborn rebel sheep!
Birdie is very funny though!
Reading Birdie's posts, it seems like he assumes that putting a lot of crème Chantilly and cherry on top of a glass of vinegar will make it tasteful and thus the con man will appear as a genius and his delirium tremens and psychotic fabulations and bouffoneries will be taken for the great discoveries of the century. (actually yes, it was the great idea of the century to make a mafia fraudulent cult appear as a religion)
Definitely scintillance brilliance style to talk about either $cientology or LRH is clownesque and embarrasing.
lotus
stubborn rebel sheep!
freethinker
Sponsor
You can't correct anything with tech that is flawed to begin with. They do play by their own rules, that IS the problem.
screamer2
Idiot Bastardson
strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
Well, having read that Sheila, you've got me so paranoid I doubt whether I'll ever write another post after this one.You make far too many English errors for Stratty to keep up, so I have volunteered to fill in a bit while he is on the other side of the ocean sleeping.
I don't have time to go through each and every error, so just provided a summary:
1. Misuse of Semicolons. These are used to separate two parts of a sentence when each of the sentence parts on either side of the semicolon can stand alone as its own sentence. For some strange reason, you seem to think semicolons are used before the word ''as."
2. Run-on Sentences.
3. Excessive Verbiage.
4. Misuse and Overuse of Ellipses.
5. Beginning a Sentence with a Conjunction.
6. Misuse and Inappropriate Use of Hyphens. "Puppetmaster" and "Judeochristian" should be, "puppet-master" (or puppet master) and "Judeo-Christian." "Far ranging" is correctly spelled, "far-ranging" and requires a hyphen. Both Christian and Judeo should also be capitalized.
7. Lack of Necessary Commas and Misuse of Commas.
8. Redundancy. Example: Instead of listing "study, research" as separate things, you could have just written either word, since they are synonyms.
9. Incomplete Sentences.
Keep working at it. You're welcome.
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strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
Yes, I'll take the smoked salmon, but sugar in the tea? Non merci, don't do it lotus.French!
Pineau des Charentes ,
Escargots, huitres et saumon fumé sur canapés
with english tea - milk and sugar.
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strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
Yes, I seem to have acquired a reputation for being an argumentative c**t, especially among the noobs. The oldies here know me better than that.Strat, seems you are getting dumped on all over the place lately....
How are you rubbing so many the wrong way?
I just don't see it in your posts....
What am I missing?
OH, it's Clay Pigeon...
strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
phenomanon said:
I remember KSW well phenom. If 'KSW series 1' is something else then you could be right about me being 'out'.
Those days are long gone lotusblossom, it's Rosie P or nothing for me these days, and to be quite honest, most of the time I just can't be botheredOh true Phenon,
Oh wait..May be uncle Stratty was stuck in bed sheets exhibiting his unprecended fabuloulsy amazing clear bracelet to impress a lovely young female
Me? Self-denial? In 1969? Not a chance.That would explain why he didn't pay any proper attention to what must be done to keep $cientology working.
He was into romantic self-abnegation!
No, far from being a dilletante (now there's a nice french word) I think I was regarded as being a bit of a tech zealot.My guess is that uncle Stratty was a $cientology dilletante!
I remember KSW well phenom. If 'KSW series 1' is something else then you could be right about me being 'out'.
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JustSheila
Crusader
Yes, I know you're really a sweet, affable old gent in disguise, here to draw attention away from the biggest c**t on the Board.
Or maybe you're something in between, but you're funny and I think you're awesome.
(You're quite controversational, actually, and nobody I've known has ever done that before.)
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strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
Hey! Not so much of the old! As for the rest, thanks for the kind words.Yes, I know you're really a sweet, affable old gent in disguise, here to draw attention away from the biggest c**t on the Board.
Or maybe you're something in between, but you're funny and I think you're awesome.
JustSheila
Crusader
Good one!Good morning, Birdy.
That's a phrase at the beginning of the sentence, so it gets a comma after it, like this:
Properly seasoned and roasted to a turn, they can be an excellent source of protein in the diet.
(I always loved your visual descriptions, btw. )
strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
Dearest Sheila.
Good morning, Birdy.
That's a phrase at the beginning of the sentence, so it gets a comma after it, like this:
Properly seasoned and roasted to a turn, they can be an excellent source of protein in the diet.
(I always loved your visual descriptions, btw. )
I hereby renounce all duties and responsibilities as grammar nazi IC ESMB and hand them over to you forthwith.
Kindest regards,
Stratty.
xxx
screamer2
Idiot Bastardson
"xxx" should be in upper case (caps).Dearest Sheila.
I hereby renounce all duties and responsibilities as grammar nazi IC ESMB and hand them over to you forthwith.
Kindest regards,
Stratty.
xxx
: "XXX
JustSheila
Crusader
No, mate. You have a lifetime appointment.Dearest Sheila.
I hereby renounce all duties and responsibilities as grammar nazi IC ESMB and hand them over to you forthwith.
Kindest regards,
Stratty.
xxx
I'm just filling in the night shift, which will undoubtedly ensure all of ESMB begs to have you back as Grammar Nazi IC ESMB as fast as possible.
strativarius
Inveterate gnashnab & snoutband
Thanks for explaining what upper case meant screamer - I had no fucking idea.
The x's are kisses and I have a very small mouth.
I told you I was trouble
Suspended animation
I've just been asked to inform you all that ESMB is about to close down for 24 hours for its annual spring clean.
Apologies for any incontinence caused.
Apologies for any incontinence caused.
