I've been off ESMB for about a week and began yesterday to catch up. Your OP was among the first I read and left me eager for more. Perhaps you can imagine my dismay when, subsequently, I saw you discouraged by the initial response and contemplating withdrawal. I was heartened to see the second (partial) episode and then this supplemental post and I venture now to hope you will persevere.
By now you have noticed that many are as eager as I to hear, "The rest of the story," and too, there are those who'd rather you didn't post it at all. Some would like to see it but in much smaller increments; others would rather get it all at once.
I fall into the "All at once" bunch and following a hint that it was all available on your 'wonder' website, went there but failed to find it.
It seems to me that your most recent post could well serve as a 'preface' on ESMB that would 'position' the story well enough to reduce the flack from those who might otherwise feel obliged to protest.
Given your comments regarding the time it takes to respond to posts directed toward you, I would suggest simply posting the whole story at once, including a note that you will respond to all 'polite' comments in the order received but that responses may get backlogged. This would almost certainly reduce the total number of comments and at least reduce the ones which would be answered 'later' in the story itself. (Less
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Another possibility, which would further reduce comments, is to -- just put the story up on some web page and throw us the link. That would seem to satisfy (nearly) all parties while also ending cycle on your initial postulate.
Please do something -- soon.
I've been 'inactive' in Scientology about as long as you have. My initial attention was drawn by reading DMSMH; but I became extremely interested after reading, "COHA," "Scientology 8-8008," "The Phoenix Lectures" and such. O.T. was the big lure.
And while it's now pretty clear that Scientology never managed to help anyone reach a stable O.T. state such as we then envisaged, unless we assume there were a hell of a lot of people willing to flat out lie, some folks did, occasionally, manage to do some extra-ordinary things. "Close but NO CIGAR, " some say. Yes, sure enough. But "CLOSE!!!"
I've heard, repeatedly, of the failures of Scientology. Got that. I still like to read of the times it got -- close.
Best,
G.